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IETLS – BAND 3 – PREPARATION-GRANOLLERS

IETLS – BAND 3 – PREPARATION-GRANOLLERS: Agriculture is very important to provide food to human and animals. Fertilizer helps to improve the crops. There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors.

     Fertilizer contains phosphorus and nitrogen. It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. For this reason, quantities of fertilizer are very important because in one hand it can sure a big crop, on the other hand, keep control the pollution.

But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate. It is necessary to take into account the weather. Is not the same the desert to the cold places. Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?

     In conclusion, the main factors that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil and the fertilizer. Thus, agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant. It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings.

Corrections :

There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors. = There are many ways to improve cultivation; it depends on the amount of fertilizers and another factors.

It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. = It makes the plants to grow better by themselves and last longer  

However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. =However, when you pour  a lot of this chemical over the ground, its water and air suffer from pollution.


it can sure a big crop = it can asssure a big crop

keep control the pollution.= keep control over the pollution.

 But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate It is necessary to take into account the weather. = But, not only the fertilizer is important, also  other factors such as the weather, the quality of water which help to  produce a big, long and healthy cultivation

Is not the same the desert to the cold places. = It is not the same the desert or  cold places.

The mistake here is the puntuaction mark:

Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?     = Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map  must be taken in account. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant.

    that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil =  that help you get better crops depend on the composition of the soil

agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant = Agriculturalist must have knowledge of how many fertilizers are needed for a  land and  what kinds of plant can be sowed.

It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings. = It would be great  these techniques would be known around the world as to produce more food for human beings.

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IETLS – BAND 3 – PREPARATION-GRANOLLERS

Agriculture is very important to provide food to human and animals. Fertilizer helps to improve the crops. There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors.

     Fertilizer contains phosphorus and nitrogen. It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. For this reason, quantities of fertilizer are very important because in one hand it can sure a big crop, on the other hand, keep control the pollution.

But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate. It is necessary to take into account the weather. Is not the same the desert to the cold places. Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?

     In conclusion, the main factors that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil and the fertilizer. Thus, agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant. It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings.

Corrections :

There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors. = There are many ways to improve cultivation; it depends on the amount of fertilizers and another factors.

It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. = It makes the plants to grow better by themselves and last longer  

However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. =However, when you pour  a lot of this chemical over the ground, its water and air suffer from pollution.



it can sure a big crop = it can asssure a big crop

keep control the pollution.= keep control over the pollution.

 But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate It is necessary to take into account the weather. = But, not only the fertilizer is important, also  other factors such as the weather, the quality of water which help to  produce a big, long and healthy cultivation

Is not the same the desert to the cold places. = It is not the same the desert or  cold places.

The mistake here is the puntuaction mark:

Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?     = Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map  must be taken in account. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant.

    that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil =  that help you get better crops depend on the composition of the soil

agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant = Agriculturalist must have knowledge of how many fertilizers are needed for a  land and  what kinds of plant can be sowed.

It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings. = It would be great  these techniques would be known around the world as to produce more food for human beings.

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IETLS – BAND -3 PREPARATION-GRANOLLERS

There are many ways to make fire. One of the most common pathways is burning wood or using stoves. However, the soot of this sort of fire produces bad chemicals for the human breath.
In the history of the human being there are a lot of relevant facts to change habits and allow evolution of humans. The fire is one of them. When the men could control the fire, they started to be nomads. Since then, we use fire for different purposes. For example, they can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories.
There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep warming. North countries have weather freeze; the residents of these areas need to make fire because the low temperatures could cause hypothermia. In one hand they might use gas or electricity, but it would be very expensive. Therefore, they prefer to use wood of their own trees, it is cheaper and they obtain their same goals.
However, new researches about the particle’s soot develop that it contains bad chemicals to produce harm in the longs of the humans. Scientifics of this field can observing that these bad pieces in the air rising health breathing problems like asthma, lung fibrosis, cancer among others. For these reasons, mistery of health had been recommending that they can´t use wood to get fire when the particles in atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter. It occurs in pollution cities of the North Pole.
To avoid this air problem, the government applies a law against to burning wood in specific days, When the air pollution is higher.
In conclusion, the residents of some towns could be fined if they burning wood to maintain the air free of chemicals to harming the live.

Correction:
One of the most common pathways is burning wood or using stoves = One of the most common way  is  to burn wood or use stoves
In the history of the human being there are a lot of relevant facts to change habits and allow evolution of humans =In the history of the human being there have been  a lot of relevant facts to change habits and also allowed the evolution of humans
When the men could control the fire, they started to be nomads. =When the men could control the fire, they started to be  nomadic tribes .
we use fire for different purposes. = we have used fire for different purposes.
they can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories. = One  can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories.

 There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep warming =There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep them warm
North countries have weather freeze; = North countries have a cold weather ;
they obtain their same goals = they obtain the same goals
However, new researches about the particle’s soot develop that it contains bad chemicals to produce harm in the longs of the humans. = However, new researches developed about the particle’s soot indicates  that it contains bad chemicals which  harms lungs of  humans.
Scientifics of this field can observing = Scientists in this field  observe
that these bad pieces in the air rising health breathing problems like asthma,  = that these bad pieces in the air rise health breathing problems like asthma,

mistery of health had been recommending that they can´t use wood to get fire when the particles in atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter = Ministery of Health has been recommending  to use wood to get fire when the particles in the atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter
It occurs in pollution cities of the North Pole. = It occurs in polluted cities of the North Pole.
the government applies a law against to burning wood in specific days. = the government passed a law against it and stated in which  specific days must be burnt wood, when the air pollution is higher.
the residents of some towns could be fined if they burning wood to maintain the air free of chemicals to harming the live. = Residents of towns could be fined if they burn wood  as to maintain the air free of chemicals that  harm the life.

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IETLS ESSAY – BAND 3- PREPARATION

Education is one of the most important aspects of a nation. Also, it represents a challenge for each education ministry. However, there are a lot of programs for students who want to be in an university school or many students aids to support them.
In each country, there are public schools and private schools, for example, in US there are universities as Harvard or Princeton as a private schools and military school as a public school. Thus, you can choose where do you can to go and how many money you have to do it. For this reason, there are different kind of schools with programs and budget for each preferences´ student. All this, engage to keep studying after bachelor degree.
On the other hand, there are many programs for people who have lower economic level and they need money to survive. For instance, students could work 20 hours per week. Other examples are some very smart or sport students with scholarship. With these pathways, the students might obtain a college degree.
In conclusion, every country has a lot of methods to stimulate to their residents to study at universities. Governments are very worry about the college degree of their persons. The education is a very important part of the human beings.
CORRECTION:
who want to be in an university school or many students aids to support them.  = who want to be in a university school or many  schoolarships to support them.
in US there are universities as Harvard or Princeton as a private schools and military school as a public school = in US there are universities like Harvard or Princeton which are private school and other like Military schools that are public ones.
Thus, you can choose where do you can to go and how many money you have to do it. = Thus you can choose where you can go and how much money you have to spend.
All this, engage to keep studying after bachelor degree = All this engages them in studying after the bachelor’s degree.
every country has a lot of methods to stimulate to their residents to study at universities. = every country has a lot of methods to stimulate their residents to study at Universities.
 Governments are very worry about the college degree of their persons. =  Governments are very worry about the college’s degree of their citizens 
education ministry = Ministry of Education

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Testimonios de Aprobados de Examénes IETLS- GRANOLLERS

Hola Breil!

Soy Marc Sabatés.
Te escribo solo para decirte que tanto a Natalia como a mi nos ha ido muy bien el examen!

En mi caso:

Listening: 7
Reading: 7.5
Writing:  6.5
Speaking: 6.5
Overall: 7

Natalia:

Listening: 8
Reading: 6.5
Writing:  6.5
Speaking: 6
Overall: 7

Gracias por tu ayuda y consejo durante todas las clases!!

Un abrazo,

Marc

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